She stood there in silence
Amazement filled her eyes
Something was blooming inside her
Trying to make things clearer
Hesitation stopped her from approaching
But curiosity had won against it
Slowly she moves her hand
Reaching for the unseen sensation
It’s an old oak tree
Immense in height and size
Remains gracefully in the horizon
The evidence of the sails of time
The bare hand touched the skin
A whisper slipped as the feeling bloomed
“What are your stories?”
A breeze carried the answer,
“You are my stories.”
9:45…edit with help of my sis..thank you and loved you ^_^
22.06…edit again, feedback from ZaQ..thanx ^_^
She stood there in silence
Amazed filled her eyes
Something was blooming inside her
Trying to make things clearer
Hesitation stop her from approaching
But curiosity had won against it
Slowly she moves her hand
Reached for the unseen sensation
It’s an old oak tree
Immense in hight and size
Remains gracefully in the horizon
The evidence of the sails of time
The bare hand touched the skin
A whisper slipped as the feeling bloomed
“What are your stories?”
A breeze carried the answer,
“You are my stories.”
–> grammar no problem lah… yang penting ceritanya nyampe. Uni cuma ngebenerin beberapa kata aja.
Btw, nice poem
@uni
done!! hontoni arogatou gozaimaaasu!!
Made it yourself? nice
Anyway, karena gw iseng :p
She stood there in silence
Amazement filled her eyes
Something was blooming inside her
Trying to make things clearer
Hesitation stopped her from approaching
But curiosity had won against it
Slowly she moves her hand
Reaching for the unseen sensation
It’s an old oak tree
Immense in height and size
Remains gracefully in the horizon
The evidence of the sails of time
The bare hand touched the skin
A whisper slipped as the feeling bloomed
“What are your stories?”
A breeze carried the answer,
“You are my stories.”
@ZaQ
thanx..
keisengan yang bermanfaat gyaha xD